Horrid Henry story

Posted on December 9, 2015 by Lowenna
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4 Responses to Horrid Henry story

  1. Katie J. CUNNINGHAM says:
    December 9, 2015 at 3:59 pm

    I like your story Lowenna!

    *You used great vocabulary.
    *You did good paragraphs.

    WISH-“But who did Peter get here so early?” doesn’t make sense.

  2. Jessica GARDNER says:
    December 9, 2015 at 5:12 pm

    I love your story Low.
    * You used great vocabulary.
    * You used excellent paragraphs.
    WISH- start a new line for yuck.
    WISH- You need to put some punctuation after a couple of speeches

  3. Evie-Mae N. WELLS says:
    December 13, 2015 at 1:02 pm

    That is so brilliant Lowenna.

  4. Tallullah D. SLATER says:
    December 16, 2015 at 5:49 pm

    I loved it.

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