the perfect picture

Posted on December 9, 2015 by Evie-Mae N. Wells
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5 Responses to the perfect picture

  1. Myles DHALIWAL says:
    December 9, 2015 at 4:00 pm

    *You used lots of vocabulary!
    *Well done! You’ve worked hard.
    WISH~ Use some capitals and spell rewind right.

  2. Finley J. WRIGHT says:
    December 9, 2015 at 4:09 pm

    “Great story Evie-Mae”
    *I love your title
    *Outstanding punctuation
    WISH. You don’t need please with a lot of E.

  3. Aleeza IMAAN says:
    December 9, 2015 at 4:12 pm

    At the start of the story you forgot your capital letter .
    *I like how you put your paragraphs so it is easier to read.
    *I also like that you put what will happen next…
    WISH ~ please write what is going to happen next.

  4. Evie-Mae N. WELLS says:
    December 12, 2015 at 9:36 am

    I have spelt rewind wright Miles!!

  5. Evie-Mae N. WELLS says:
    December 12, 2015 at 9:38 am

    Finley:
    I have only spelt please like that because Peter is going like this pleeeeeeease

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