Halloween

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  1. Mr T. Holder says:

    Well done, Polly. I enjoyed reading this – your work is always really imaginative!

    *I like how you’ve highlighted certain phrases by using ‘ ‘ – it gives them emphasis. The reader can infer that it actually means something else! Very clever 🙂
    *I also like the range of openers such as : ‘When’ ‘As’ and ‘Usually’ It’s good a have variety when writing.

    WISH – Keep up the hard work – if there’s anything else you’d like to write for the blog then just go for it!

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