Hi Katie – you’re really enjoying the blogging, aren’t you? Thank you for working hard on this.
* You used fronted adverbials with commas really well. The start is clearly punctuated.
* Your writing is imaginative and enjoyable to read. It left me wanting to know more about the flying firemen.
Wish – sp. of / off
gr. Instead of saying ‘you should of seen the chaos’ you need to say: ‘you should HAVE seen the chaos’
Dear Katie,
My name is Meredith from Mrs. Schmidt’s third grade in the USA. I am 9 years old and I like to dance. My favorite food is pizza. I really enjoyed reading your story because I liked the flying firemen! What is your favorite food?
Hi Katie – you’re really enjoying the blogging, aren’t you? Thank you for working hard on this.
* You used fronted adverbials with commas really well. The start is clearly punctuated.
* Your writing is imaginative and enjoyable to read. It left me wanting to know more about the flying firemen.
Wish – sp. of / off
gr. Instead of saying ‘you should of seen the chaos’ you need to say: ‘you should HAVE seen the chaos’
Dear Katie,
My name is Meredith from Mrs. Schmidt’s third grade in the USA. I am 9 years old and I like to dance. My favorite food is pizza. I really enjoyed reading your story because I liked the flying firemen! What is your favorite food?
From,
Meredith