Hi Scarlett – thank you for entering the 100 word challenge this week.
* You paragraphed your work clearly – I’m pleased that you remembered to use a new line for the speech.
* You included a good range of punctuation . ? ” ” !
Wish – Think about the correct word from: there/ their / they’re … also; remember to use commas after fronted adverbials like Once upon a time, or The next morning,
Hi Scarlett!
My name is Evelyn. I love your story! It’s awesome! I’m from Mrs. Schmidt’s 3rd grade class in the USA. I’m 8 years old. My favorite color is blue. I would love to hear some things about you.
Bye! from Evelyn.
Hi Scarlett – thank you for entering the 100 word challenge this week.
* You paragraphed your work clearly – I’m pleased that you remembered to use a new line for the speech.
* You included a good range of punctuation . ? ” ” !
Wish – Think about the correct word from: there/ their / they’re … also; remember to use commas after fronted adverbials like Once upon a time, or The next morning,
Hi Scarlett! I loved your story THE GREAT FIRE OF THE SHARD…
* You used a simile-As quick as.
* You used great adjectives-Random, Regretted.
* You used the Aerial Fireman picture.
WISH-Like Mr Holder said-think about the three there/their/they’re.
Hi!
Hi Scarlett!
My name is Evelyn. I love your story! It’s awesome! I’m from Mrs. Schmidt’s 3rd grade class in the USA. I’m 8 years old. My favorite color is blue. I would love to hear some things about you.
Bye! from Evelyn.