Well done, William; this is a well-written piece. I like how you’ve organised the writing into clear paragraphs and your range of punctuation, including a rhetorical question, is excellent. You’ve clearly researched this carefully and highlighted why rainforests are so important.
Next time could you add more pictures, such as maps or of the tree frog you mention, to support the text?
1HP
Well done, William; this is a well-written piece. I like how you’ve organised the writing into clear paragraphs and your range of punctuation, including a rhetorical question, is excellent. You’ve clearly researched this carefully and highlighted why rainforests are so important.
Next time could you add more pictures, such as maps or of the tree frog you mention, to support the text?
1HP