Well done, Aleeza. I enjoyed your story and you’ve worked hard on it!
* You used a good range of punctuation correctly.
* You’ve organised your writing into paragraphs so it is easier to read.
WISH – Try to make sure that both pages have the same colour scheme. You could also try adding a picture or two.
Well done, Aleeza. I enjoyed your story and you’ve worked hard on it!
* You used a good range of punctuation correctly.
* You’ve organised your writing into paragraphs so it is easier to read.
WISH – Try to make sure that both pages have the same colour scheme. You could also try adding a picture or two.
I like the whole idea, Aleeza!
* Well laid out!
* Brilliant paragraphs, Aleeza!
WISH – Maybe read over your sentences to make sure they make sense…
MARY 🙂
Thanks Mary I will look back at my work since
I am on it today Mary….My little sister is being a bit nosy and reading your and my comments