Hi Joss – I’ve been impressed by how much blogging you’ve been doing!
* You did well to stick to the 100 words and you used the prompt.
* I like the word ‘ suspicious’ – a good choice!
* You title is bold and eye-catching.
Wish – Remember to proof-read very carefully. I’m a little confused by the last part – ‘they ruled as EVIL!’ What does this mean?
Also check your tense – blow up should be blew up for the past tense.
Dear Joss I really liked your story. I like goose bumps so I really enjoyed it. I did not think the cinema was going to blow up so it was very unexpected. My name is Diego I am 8 years old. My favorite color is black. I’m in Mrs.Schmidt’s class in the U.S.A.
Hi Joss – I’ve been impressed by how much blogging you’ve been doing!
* You did well to stick to the 100 words and you used the prompt.
* I like the word ‘ suspicious’ – a good choice!
* You title is bold and eye-catching.
Wish – Remember to proof-read very carefully. I’m a little confused by the last part – ‘they ruled as EVIL!’ What does this mean?
Also check your tense – blow up should be blew up for the past tense.
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Dear Joss I really liked your story. I like goose bumps so I really enjoyed it. I did not think the cinema was going to blow up so it was very unexpected. My name is Diego I am 8 years old. My favorite color is black. I’m in Mrs.Schmidt’s class in the U.S.A.
From,
Diego